tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post1471958985507071163..comments2024-03-23T06:04:32.332-07:00Comments on Confessions in Stories: Fire (excerpt)nicolewianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12836201941173083316noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-63609253643726988002011-11-14T05:43:28.187-08:002011-11-14T05:43:28.187-08:00Great, love her Keith disdain, beautiful daydream....Great, love her Keith disdain, beautiful daydream.Kirsty @ Bowerbird Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12511849105347338654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-7116122369906952602011-11-12T22:27:07.563-08:002011-11-12T22:27:07.563-08:00Clever, funny use of the prompt. You gave us a lit...Clever, funny use of the prompt. You gave us a little story here, in just 5 mins! The twist was well played, unexpected but it brought a smile to my face. Well done!InkPaperPenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14595595934607152505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-37425597023294503632011-11-10T08:41:10.287-08:002011-11-10T08:41:10.287-08:00Lovely, a pure pleasure to read. With a quite funn...Lovely, a pure pleasure to read. With a quite funny ending!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-21542638911167559582011-11-09T00:58:11.066-08:002011-11-09T00:58:11.066-08:00As someone once said: "Silences make the real...As someone once said: "Silences make the real conversations between friends. Not the saying but the never needing to say is what counts."<br /><br />Or, in this case, lovers. So true! I did not expect the piece to turn in such a sharp angle, Nicole. I was delighting in your wonderful description of what it is like to kiss someone you love with all your heart, and then you ripped that away from me and introduced a clever plot twist. Excellent!<br /><br />/ RainRainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02853997873870014947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-35920034365540032102011-11-08T18:53:43.684-08:002011-11-08T18:53:43.684-08:00*snort* 'It was better when he didn't spea...*snort* 'It was better when he didn't speak.' Love that line! The passion of the imagination juxtaposed with the crashing mundanity of real life. Great!No onehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05516581267618212776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-4073543749635282072011-11-08T18:09:11.752-08:002011-11-08T18:09:11.752-08:00hahahahahaha oh how I loved that last line! for m...hahahahahaha oh how I loved that last line! for me, its nearly always better when they don't speak :) great job xEloisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13750919034120118112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-37073354601099799422011-11-08T17:37:29.030-08:002011-11-08T17:37:29.030-08:00hahah-this is why fantasy beats real life 99% of t...hahah-this is why fantasy beats real life 99% of the time :D Love it!Jaynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15772862427317598066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-47083842322392478582011-11-08T17:11:18.843-08:002011-11-08T17:11:18.843-08:00Love the last line...so true, so true.Love the last line...so true, so true.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18421928919601722343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-28806503362122267222011-11-08T09:25:43.101-08:002011-11-08T09:25:43.101-08:00Ha! I love it! Sometimes the quiet is much better....Ha! I love it! Sometimes the quiet is much better. Great job with this prompt. I love the concrete images you have created.Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03733516439846527903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-87692125505574354392011-11-08T01:20:07.930-08:002011-11-08T01:20:07.930-08:00Gorgeous!! Nothing like fantasy interruptus!Gorgeous!! Nothing like fantasy interruptus!spring days, new growthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12809670414388039109noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-71185423705106611372011-11-07T16:42:01.375-08:002011-11-07T16:42:01.375-08:00I like the turn of humor at the end. Great story....I like the turn of humor at the end. Great story.Zanre5https://www.blogger.com/profile/10595715453463823575noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-21016368103858001562011-11-07T13:44:08.046-08:002011-11-07T13:44:08.046-08:00This is awesome! Love the humor :)This is awesome! Love the humor :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-25706880683785458832011-11-07T13:37:18.380-08:002011-11-07T13:37:18.380-08:00Ha ha, don't you just HATE it when they destro...Ha ha, don't you just HATE it when they destroy the illusion - this is great :)Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.com