tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post3923849296930362855..comments2024-03-13T19:04:41.135-07:00Comments on Confessions in Stories: What's Hidden?/ Perfect Poem Award :)nicolewianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12836201941173083316noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-16121407716973459272011-10-12T00:59:17.922-07:002011-10-12T00:59:17.922-07:00Well done, nice poetry here :)Well done, nice poetry here :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-91356413128165837732011-10-10T18:49:35.750-07:002011-10-10T18:49:35.750-07:00A perfect way to end the poem, I really enjoyed th...A perfect way to end the poem, I really enjoyed this. I've also written a poem with the line, "you and I are poetry". It's safe to say yours is much better; you created the scene in a lovely way. I can relate.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-17542265346624102692011-10-07T03:15:43.074-07:002011-10-07T03:15:43.074-07:00The last two stanzas could well stand on their own...The last two stanzas could well stand on their own, but the questions lead up to them nicely. I enjoyed this! *smile*Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-40928481441423814752011-10-06T17:22:48.367-07:002011-10-06T17:22:48.367-07:00I love your last stanza I do believe you need to w...I love your last stanza I do believe you need to write your own so well done great poem<br />http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/05/today%e2%80%99s-feelings/Ann LeFlorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09421100825301270608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-48431111128324190272011-10-06T14:30:29.254-07:002011-10-06T14:30:29.254-07:00Wonderful use of rhetorical question.
Here is my ...Wonderful use of rhetorical question.<br /><br />Here is my entry:<br />http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/10/everyone.htmlJack Edwards Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11813177533690643652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-66690084753175553152011-10-05T21:59:34.641-07:002011-10-05T21:59:34.641-07:00Kathy, I like being academically picked apart!Kathy, I like being academically picked apart!nicolewianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12836201941173083316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-4901932153528277652011-10-05T20:26:56.054-07:002011-10-05T20:26:56.054-07:00"Can you call it like it is?" is intrigu..."Can you call it like it is?" is intriguing because it seems to ask a question about simile, as much as about the possibility of any fit between words and reality, and about the particular "you" that the poem addresses. Okay, this is me sounding academic!Kathy B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09475101089455608729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-37403736255369634282011-10-05T15:56:52.517-07:002011-10-05T15:56:52.517-07:00Sometimes it is so hard to let someone else write ...Sometimes it is so hard to let someone else write his or her story!<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/as-jesus-walked/" rel="nofollow">My Contribution</a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-89084667445303654682011-10-05T15:11:09.311-07:002011-10-05T15:11:09.311-07:00Thepoetsquill, ah, yes, love the idea that a good ...Thepoetsquill, ah, yes, love the idea that a good poem finds its own truth.nicolewianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12836201941173083316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-74428507547207342752011-10-05T13:56:49.138-07:002011-10-05T13:56:49.138-07:00Someone once said, "Poets lie too much."...Someone once said, "Poets lie too much." Maybe, but it's our stock in trade. A good poem finds its own truth.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-75790399918940270962011-10-05T12:22:46.126-07:002011-10-05T12:22:46.126-07:00you and I are poetry, wow.
love the ideas.
best.you and I are poetry, wow.<br /><br />love the ideas.<br />best.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-86021236196557562092011-10-05T11:55:41.286-07:002011-10-05T11:55:41.286-07:00The last stanza ties the questions and ideas toget...The last stanza ties the questions and ideas together strongly.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com