tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post6443473163540289497..comments2024-03-23T06:04:32.332-07:00Comments on Confessions in Stories: Existencenicolewianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12836201941173083316noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-18844845975754431542013-03-22T08:16:02.866-07:002013-03-22T08:16:02.866-07:00A doll - or a living woman trying to escape from o...A doll - or a living woman trying to escape from other people's expectations of who she 'should' be? Either way, this is strong writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-49169575679775109152013-03-21T19:40:28.078-07:002013-03-21T19:40:28.078-07:00There's a depth of feeling here that contrasts...There's a depth of feeling here that contrasts nicely with the cosmetic surface of the doll. You've sent my mind adrift wondering about the pain. A well executed central metaphor and response to the prompt.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17392858163745232319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-78069853057057252462013-03-21T19:21:13.991-07:002013-03-21T19:21:13.991-07:00We all need to find our own niche in life. Like ho...We all need to find our own niche in life. Like how you have taken this and given it your own touch. Commenting from dVerse.Reneehttp://reneejustturtleflight.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-14486596340843774632013-03-21T18:19:16.213-07:002013-03-21T18:19:16.213-07:00I like how you have personified the doll with atti...I like how you have personified the doll with attitude. Great formatting here, too.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-90987509975961532242013-03-21T13:48:05.954-07:002013-03-21T13:48:05.954-07:00work it while it works,
until the rage
...work it while it works,<br />until the rage<br /> is more than I can bear,<br />and crowded,<br />I try and push my way into existence of name.<br /><br />dang....love that...it pulls us into the tension and frustration, and batting your lashes cause you are told that is who you are as well....well it could be a doll...or it could be a person as well...nice...like it much nicole...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-66898180665967640602013-03-21T13:46:54.047-07:002013-03-21T13:46:54.047-07:00nice...love the breaking free of what others dicta...nice...love the breaking free of what others dictate to be...i like also how you describe the way to get there... think sometimes it's difficult for people to handle our weaknesses and so they focus on what they see or want to see.. great on finding the proper frame..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com