tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post9176060348306695148..comments2024-03-23T06:04:32.332-07:00Comments on Confessions in Stories: Green Roomnicolewianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12836201941173083316noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-21369463441162436962011-10-07T18:01:13.894-07:002011-10-07T18:01:13.894-07:00I can really feel the anxiety and stress here! Mad...I can really feel the anxiety and stress here! Made me feel nervous just reading it.Lenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01967670281829933493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-8061460045948601152011-10-07T16:15:43.772-07:002011-10-07T16:15:43.772-07:00I felt tense just reading this! You conveyed that...I felt tense just reading this! You conveyed that across really well with the stream of consciousness. <br />Funny how we yearn to achieve certain things, but then when we get close to acquiring them we can get so nervous and question if we're really doing the right thing?!Janellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06459852025135239788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-29841022865954945522011-10-07T06:12:17.768-07:002011-10-07T06:12:17.768-07:00I could feel the almost breathlessness of this as ...I could feel the almost breathlessness of this as I was reading it. Really well done.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-45127209777228894792011-10-05T22:19:34.998-07:002011-10-05T22:19:34.998-07:00Funny thing is, it really was green! :) Glad I was...Funny thing is, it really was green! :) Glad I was able to inspire you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-72859856330058883682011-10-05T21:09:38.800-07:002011-10-05T21:09:38.800-07:00Nicely done. You can definitely feel the anxiety....Nicely done. You can definitely feel the anxiety. :)Kimberleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17787970553045999626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-30952079859406974472011-10-05T20:47:37.371-07:002011-10-05T20:47:37.371-07:00I chose this exercise for this week, too. I like w...I chose this exercise for this week, too. I like what you've done with yours, and I like the style of the short sentences, giving the sense of anxiety the character has here.Kerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07000402109977122989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-72231031721285046242011-10-05T18:47:03.767-07:002011-10-05T18:47:03.767-07:00Yes, we did a lot of stream of consciousness exerc...Yes, we did a lot of stream of consciousness exercises in the first few weeks. I really enjoy this form of writing. I agree with Feisty Cat, I liked the Yoga reference. If you continued with this story, I think it would be really interesting if she did start doing Yoga! Be interesting to see what reaction she got.<br /><br />Gill xInkPaperPenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14595595934607152505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-9514566291136477442011-10-05T15:12:17.473-07:002011-10-05T15:12:17.473-07:00Thanks!Thanks!nicolewianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12836201941173083316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7592035793732936823.post-51902052356805564452011-10-05T14:41:05.076-07:002011-10-05T14:41:05.076-07:00Nice stream of consciousness. I really like the yo...Nice stream of consciousness. I really like the yoga reference. <br /><br />--FeistyA.K. Knighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16111102807271240215noreply@blogger.com