I sense the need for strategy, a battle plan, or at very least,
a change.
The inner man is
centering
while appetite of
flesh, unsated
draws lines.
So, I study plot and step,
a map of curious sorts.
Heat creeps in, elated, breaking
breach of peace
and pursuant, she circles round my frail human variance,
exposing weakened will.
To keep within,
hold fast
to
letting go.
War is a theme, but there are many ways to fight, and
the true hero, though he
evades not danger,
waits for call.
I crouch and listen.
and when signal sounds,
shift course,
weave through enemy land.
Armed at last with quietude, I am unafraid.
I find victory
in surrender.
The Mag
Poetry Jam
Victory in surrender is such an interesting take on this prompt. Sounds like an excellent strategy -- finding quietude. Thanks for posting.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Peggy.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant Nicole - pure brilliance. Love it!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Sometimes surrendering is the only option, and can be the smartest option. Loved your poetry ... and its form.
ReplyDeleteVery well done!
ReplyDeleteLovely... I especially like the ending!
ReplyDeleteWeave through the enemy land - This is an excellent line and captures for me the heart of this. Well done.
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