"Some stories are true that never happened" _Elie Wiesel
Friday, August 8, 2014
Surrender
So, I drip sap for you. Wrangle
words. You are my vice. You are mine. I have given up the fight, tired of pretending there's anything I want to write about but you.
love the imagery of dripping sap... I like this because you say the person is your vice, and giving up the fight must be freeing, but is this love good for you? nice write. smiles.
love the imagery of dripping sap... I like this because you say the person is your vice, and giving up the fight must be freeing, but is this love good for you? nice write. smiles.
ReplyDeletesmiles...an endearing feeling to this one nicole
ReplyDeleteall words lead back to them eh?
Sounds like a complicated relationship! Great write.
ReplyDeletethis is very strong, if we lose ourselves in others were they really good for us.
ReplyDeletei love the imagery used here...and the complexity in the speaker's mind...
ReplyDeletesmiles... there's magic in writing for the person you love
ReplyDelete; ) write and let him drip out of your life. Love shouldn't be a vice.
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