Friday, August 8, 2014

Surrender

So, I drip sap for you.
Wrangle
words.
You are my vice.
You are mine.
I have given
up the fight, tired
of pretending
there's anything
                    I want
to write about but
you.

dverse

7 comments:

  1. love the imagery of dripping sap... I like this because you say the person is your vice, and giving up the fight must be freeing, but is this love good for you? nice write. smiles.

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  2. smiles...an endearing feeling to this one nicole
    all words lead back to them eh?

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  3. Sounds like a complicated relationship! Great write.

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  4. this is very strong, if we lose ourselves in others were they really good for us.

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  5. i love the imagery used here...and the complexity in the speaker's mind...

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  6. smiles... there's magic in writing for the person you love

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  7. ; ) write and let him drip out of your life. Love shouldn't be a vice.

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