Thursday, January 5, 2012

Our Funeral

I walk
  with all but I want to
fly away.  Escape the rain, the same, the progression we are on.
                 The long journey toward our funeral where no one cries but me.



submitting at Bluebell Books 

9 comments:

  1. you are the only one who cries about the loss,

    how moving.
    lovely entry.

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  2. beautiful goodbye captured, glad to see you share.

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  3. Nicely done.

    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/01/04/cinnamon/

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  4. What a sad and stirring piece. Excellent use of the prompt.

    -Traci B

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  5. Wow, short and powerful! Who knew that thirty-two short words could tell such a long, moving story. I loved it! Be blessed.

    http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/

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  6. such power behind those few lines... and the last one made me pause in awe!

    ~L
    www.untitledmoments.com

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