Finally,
you spoke the words I've needed,
gave proper meaning
to the
language of dreams,
and I, for once, was
speechless, unable to voice the emotion
even
as
my mind,
propelled by thoughts exposed,
flew straight down to desire's cellar door,
locked for years and years.
Volumes, written, unwritten,
lay just past a closed past but
I stand
so close, safe now, beneath
the house of lies
I'd built my life in, carrying one small
seed, a token of hope, and there's somehow
promise of growth,
dark as it is
in
the depths.
With a match struck to aid the hint
of moonlight offering, wiggling
through slats, never filled in,
I can see well enough.
It's as
simple as the turn. The sphere remains.
I come for long
lost heart of flesh.
The Sunday Whirl
Write at the Merge
Such beautiful writing...Loved it.....
ReplyDeleteI am here after SO long!! Sorry about that!!
inside that bowl, I see the whole world
the flow based on the shape adds intensity to your thoughts.
ReplyDeleteGrowth in the darkness is truly a hopeful concept, and it solidifies the overall feeling of the poem.
ReplyDelete"so close, safe now, beneath
ReplyDeletethe house of lies
I'd built my life in, carrying one small seed,
a token of hope..."
Very moving!
Katie atBankerchick Scratchings
Interesting use of the prompt!
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