Monday, May 7, 2012
In overgrown brush, lush,
she sits
and waits amidst
the thrush like chorus of outer work
and inner work and the silent
science of it all,
cultivating flora framework
for the growth and fare and fair
of vintage
vineyard so
she may one day drink
abundantly
and have her
fill. Bursting forth, exploding bloom, she
surveys the work and knows full well that much
has come from one who started out
with nothing.
Noontide
shimmers, glimmers graciously
with much ado,
aiding progress and she notices
now the need,
the speed
that
brought, propels and gives.
With singleness of heart, she
diligently shears – allows- that she, herself
might be grafted into this prized
place that she adores. It’s
voiceless here ‘cept for the whisper of the wind
which she recognizes well and
she’s the only creature
here
and therefore safe.
She’s untamed and breathing, coming into life, domesticated,not. It’s the sky that will train her. She’ll take her
cues from hues and clouds, gladly
gulping rain. The wide world
waits but she
has
no wish to leave her habitat of heaven where, light,
she’s buoyant body. She knows not the
meaning of inhalation but steady, focused anyway, she
swills the air. Staying is what
she
seizes, understands and toil,
instrumental which brings
her rest.
Showers
stream, mingling
with tears
she can not
fathom, saturated
so, by so much sufficient satisfaction.
How can she know so much and so
little and still be still? It’s the versant,
virescent variegating
of veined but violet
vision where introspection ripens into more than
speculation and all
is bare
but beautiful
and beckons,
bright. She doesn’t see her skin
here; it’s pallid colored but
still allowed to blend with seed or star and she lodges,
burrowed, anchored to exist in absence of
herself.
Gooseberry
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Very neat. I really like a lot of what you've done here. First off, I love the way you arranged the text, I play around with line placement all the time, for both the obvious artistry and aesthetics it created but also as it creates a guiding path and a natural flow. The rhyme is subtle at times, a bit more obvious at others, love the way you worked the rhythm evenly between external and internal rhyme. Some incredible use of language and some nice assonance/consonance as well. Very nicely done. Thanks
ReplyDeleteyes, i like the line breaks too. beautiful first lines, very attention-grabbing, makes you want to read on. :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteThis is my favorite line: It’s the sky that will train her. She’ll take her
cues from hues and clouds, gladly
rich and deep.
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