Sunday, September 18, 2011

Bold

Bold is the ocean,
Bold, too, the land she tramples,
I, timid as sand.
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3 comments:

  1. GraceSeptember 18, 2011 at 4:07 PM

    I like the boldness of the ocean and the timid sand...you got the old haiku form ~ lovely ~

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  2. Ramesh SoodSeptember 19, 2011 at 6:46 AM

    Be bold.. and why not..I think sand is bold too.. faces the sea courageously..

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  3. Rosie GanSeptember 19, 2011 at 8:11 AM

    This is goooood.I like the form.
    Rosie

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