I had seen in part and that year
after the snow had fallen,
then melted;
when in
the dead of night,
the draught like golden
opened,
I awoke and
knew in full,
the fragrance riding in with force
against all aureate
designs.
My resignation came much later,
stretching in shades,
as my
sight improved.
To
test the
theory,
I offered you a drink.
You indulged and
returned to self.
In falsetto trill, you willed me gone,
climbed walls like vine, reveling in the
sugared relish of hovering demise.
You left
me no choice.
Stories, incomprehensible, tainted vows,
and I
fell into a summer bliss. I felt
the revelation first, viewed
the molting of your words,
the nothing left, slithering
between the bloom.
The end
of secret
things.
Write at the Merge
Wow. So many images and feelings stirred in this piece. I'm not sure if I totally get it ... but I like it! Well done.
ReplyDeleteGreat take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteI could never write like this and still come up with something so comprehensible. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThis has very discriptive imagery. Very interesting.
ReplyDelete"slithering between the bloom" brought shivers. There's something so dark about that line that made me aware that what was between them is truly gone.
ReplyDelete"My resignation came much later,
ReplyDeletestretching in shades,
as my
sight improved."
resignation stretching out the way eyesight does as we experience the darkness... what a great comparison!
Such beautiful language here; I particularly loved "fragrance riding in with force" and "sugared relish."
ReplyDeleteI'm most fond of the end. The end of secret things. It reads like the title to a book, and so therefore, in all endings is a beginning. Well done!
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