My will will
bend to make room
for
You.
Your arms have
interfered with my resistance.
Tired
And
Diminishing,
my
Art still takes Your form.
Lend me your Eyes. Fill me with Your wish, Your
Poetry.
Wash me. I’m sick of
striving in this wildwood. Your voice,
When
At
last I hear it, silken milk and honey…soul warming articulation.
Give to me, that old-fashioned happiness that once, I knew. Away, I’m uncompleted.
Every
Intention breaks, my drunken heart,
Thirsting and
misguided. If I
Need
the desert,
Then carry me
there, the
Comradeship to satiate. The impossibility
Of
Your ways absolve me of my sin-
Guide my steps, closer, closer. Take me home where secrets
of the palace belong to me and crystal contemplations lead to virtue. Chaste in union, your coloring-the design,
Without
Which, I have not the
Health
for this.
Rich with yearning.
ReplyDeleteI think it might just be worth the effort...!
ReplyDeleteI think so :)
DeleteYour poem for me speaks to a loving and trusting surrending
ReplyDeletethat flows inside to outside. Love- chaste in union.
That's a beautiful interpretation and one I can agree with. :)
DeleteI like how you play with capitalization - it brings focus to certain words. And I really like the alliteration in wish, wash, and then wildwood - unexpected, but pleasurable.
ReplyDeleteRichard
Thanks, Richard :)
DeleteThe empty space in this poem is used as strongly as the words are.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Cameron.
DeleteWhat a passionate (and I hope not unanswered) plea!
ReplyDeleteWhirling with Bram Stoker
As always, I am fascinated at the variety of responses that rise so beautifully from the same dozen words. Nicely done!.
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